短文改错的教学设计

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东亭中学 顾静芳

教学目标:通过高三后阶段 的专项复习,使学生在解题方法、技巧等方面有所提高,增强做改错的信心,以求在做高考的第五大部分能够得心应手,提高该部分的得分率。

教学方法:有易到难,有坡度,有层次,循序渐进,夹练夹析的互动,探究,任务型。

设计思路:从现象归纳到理论,到技巧、方法,到练习实践。

学情分析:经过对一模,二模该部分的得分情况分析,学生在解此部分题,只凭感觉,不会分析,同时学生对改错有畏难情绪,没有信心。

动词常见错误

1)时态不一致(And 等并列连词前后动词时态不一致)。

2)主谓不一致。

3)缺少谓语动词(尤其缺be动词)。

4)主动语态与被动语态错用。

5)短语错用。

6) 近义动词错用

Examples:

1We lost our way in the forest,what is worse, it began to rain.

2We lost our way in the forest,what is worse, it began to rain.

3.Today it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.(NMET93)

4.The time passed quickly. Evening came down.(NMET2002)

5. I was used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.(NMET97)

6.We fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.(NMET2002)

7. The librarian will let you know when the book you want has returned.(NMET94

8.By the way, when you come, please take your sister here

非谓语动词常见的错误

1)不定式

2)动名词作主语、宾语

3)and 连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时) 4)现在分词和过去分词的区别等。

1. They will do all they can make sure that I get a good education

2. Play football makes us grow up tall and strong.(NMET1998

3. It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.

4.It is hoped that all the world will pay attention to protect wild life. (NMET94)

5.About twenty people have passed the driving test,me including.(NMET95)

名词,数词的常见错误

1.单复数名词错用

2.形容词错用为名词,如: important-importance,different-difference,difficult---difficulty,interesting (interested)---interest,

4. 数词错用

1. We will get over the difficult we have building the bridge.

2. I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(NMET2001)

3.On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (NMET2002)

4. Two third of the students are from Europe.

形容词、副词的错误

1)修饰名词用形容词;

2)在系动词后作表语用形容词;

3)修饰实义动词,形容词,过去分词及整个句子用副词;

4)比较等级问题。

1. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(NMET96

2.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.(NMET98)

3.It was about noon when we arrived

at the foot of the mountain. The three

of them were very excited.

介词的错误

1.We practise for three times every week.

2. On the dark night,the girl could find nobody to turn for help.

3.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

冠词的错误

1. Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher.(NMET2000)

2.We may be one family and live under a same roof.(NMET2001)

2. As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(NMET2002)

3. The food was expensive and the service was good. (NMET2002)

连词.关系词.句子结构及逻辑错误

1.…but it didn’t matter that I would win or not.(NMET2000)

2.When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf.(NMET2000)

3.…she was smiling but nodding at me.(NMET2000)

4.The food was expensive and the service was good. (NMET2002)

5.I heard the news our school football team had won the match.

巩固练习 . 单句

1.You can’t consider him a honest man.

2.In China,children usually start school at an age of seven.

3.People remember him for his contribution to the country.

4.Knowing is one thing; doing is other.

5.The ones what you decide not to keep can be traded with other people.

6.By the time when he was 15,he had become famous for his novel.

7.The bad news made us feel sadly.

8.The children learn to read and write, they play games as good.

9.He told me the fact which the earth goes round the sun.

10.Waving one’s hand can be accepted for crying for help.

11.He is the very person that set the theater in fire.

12.So far, he made a living by picking up wastes.

13.The students watch the game burst into laughter.

14.The church burned down yesterday date from the 18th century

15.Compare to 1992, the price of grain was increased about 50%

14.We should stop the children from play fire.

15.With a boy led the way,they started towards the village.

16.Whatever you do, and I’ll be right here waiting for you.

17.The young man dressed in blue are my brother.

18. I told him the fact which the earth goes round the sun.

巩固练习.综合

解题技巧

1. No context, no text. 通读全文,掌握大意;联系上下文;

2. 先易后难,正确的句子放在最后改;

3. 同一句子不能改动两个地方(词);

4. 正确、规范使用批改符号。

Exercise :

Another problem is that good soil is gradual lost. 1_______

When trees is cut down,there is nothing to hold 2_______

the soil in the place on the hillside. So when it 3_______

rained,the soil is washed down the hills and into 4_______

the rivers.Strong winds can also blow out the 5_______

valuable soil lies on the top of the fields. 6_______

Exercise :

If you take care notice in some places,you will 1________

see the fact most smokers are young people and even 2________

some are middle school students.It is said that in 3________

China the number of the people smoked is about 4________

45%. Why is so many people smoke? Some think 5________

that smoking is pleasure,some believe that they 6________

can refresh them by smoking. In fact, smoking 7________

is a bad habit,that does great harm to people’s 8________

healthy. The study of smoking shows that many 9________

kinds of disease has something to do with smoking. 10______

小 结

做短文该错应采取三个步骤

1.通读短文,掌握大意

2.细读全文,逐一作答

3.复读全文,验证答案