作者：秦显贵
同学们，进入初中学习已经有一段时间了。对初中的学习生活你们有什么切身感受吗？先让我们来看看下面小作者的亲身体会吧！
My name is Beth. I'm 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hui'an. My school is very big and beautiful. I'm very happy in the school.
I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.
We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes, because my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. It's very interesting and exciting. I think it's helpful for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play basketball, soccer ball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.
I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life is more and more meaningful and colorful. My school life is wonderful, isn't it?
简评：本文写出了该生的学校生活，写出了其对校园生活的感受。文章语言平实，使读者有身临其境的感觉。但文章中段与段之间过渡得不够自然。相信再多加练习，一定能写出更好的文章。