高考写作系列辅导(九)

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纵观我国各省市的中考作文题,目前来说还处于作文的初级阶段,也就是我们常说的描红和模拟阶段。这是由于我们英语词汇量有限,所接触的英语真正流通量太小,还不能自由发挥地用英语进行真正的写作。因此,中考书面表达题常以提示性作文为主,下面就具体说说这类作文的写法。

1.牢固扎实地掌握英语各项基础知识并灵活运用(大到句法、词法,小到大小写、标点符号的使用,遣词造句、连句成文等)。

2.观察理解试题要求的提示内容,独立思考,组织信息材料,安排短语结构,决定先后顺序,确定表达方法。

3.会使用英语中的连词,如and,but,so,等,使短文衔接自如,给文章润色,提高表达效果。

4.掌握并能熟练使用各种应用文的体例、常用语、格式等。

写提示作文有技巧吗?有!

1.认真审题,明确要求。在提笔写作之前,花几分钟时间,弄清题目提示的内容、格式、时间、环境等,以免出现文不对题的现象,造成不必要的时间浪费。审题应包括:(1)仔细阅读写作要求和提示,在重点词下划线,以引起重视和注意;(2)用a,b,c等符号排列要点,把材料分成主次;(3)确定体裁、格式和人物;(4)确定表达的时间主线--时态及其相关搭配用法。

2.写作一定要切题,抓住要点。题目要求的内容应写进去,以保证内容的完整。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥,画蛇添足。

3.写作必须注意格式。比如英汉信件、日记、通知在格式上就有较大的不同。平常应多读、多记、多练相关文体课本、同步练习以达到实际运用的目的。

4.注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。在写不同题材和体裁时,所用的句式、时态、语言特征及用词均不同。写作时要多从交流的角度考虑以上各个方面。

5.写作时切忌用汉译英的方式进行。在写信时,考生不要把题目中的汉语指令直接译成英语,要尽量用简练的、地道的英语来写。

6.写作应连贯、流畅。尽量使用最熟悉的词句,少用复合句和长句,多用简单句、短句和主动句。

7.检查时应着重注意以下内容:(1)动词的时态和语态;(2)单词拼写;(3)冠词、介词用法;(4)语序;(5)名词的数与主谓一致;(6)句意与语法的一致性;(7)标点、格式、词数等。

看个例题吧!

(2002年常州市)根据要点提示写一篇短文。要求:语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范,要点齐全。词数60-80(标点符号不计入总词数)。

要点提示:1.上星期天上午我一直在图书馆看书。2.走出图书馆发现自行车不在了,只好步行回家。3.昨天去买车,款式很多难以挑选4.店主说,常州产的金狮自行车物美价廉,我买了一辆蓝色的。

思路点拨:

本篇书面表达比较简单,同学主要应注意以下几点:

1.因为是叙述一件已经发生过的事情,所以全文一定要注意时态统一,用过去时态。有的同学在句中有表示过去时间的词语时,能注意运用正确时态,而其他情况下容易混淆。

2.一件事情总有其发展的先后顺序,所以在叙述时一定要注意事情发展的条理,注意前后语句的连贯性。

3.要注意词的运用,如walk,home,Jinshi bikes,made,in Changzhou.

参考范文

Last Sunday morning I was in the library.When I got out of it,I found my bike wasn't there.I had to walk home.Yesterday I went to buy a new one.There were many kinds of bikes in the shop.I couldn't decide which to choose.Then the shopkeeper told me that Jinshi bikes made in Changzhou were nice and cheap.So I bought a blue one.

怎么样,会了吗?做几个中考题练练吧!

1.(2002年福州市)根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数60-70左右。

(1)昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。(2)在路上我们遇见了一个外国人。(3)他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。(4)我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。(5)他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。

提示词语:go out for a walk,on the road,the way to,walk along,on the left,thank for,be happy that.

2.(2002年黄冈市)小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者:他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友……在交谈中,小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明,并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴,他甜蜜地笑了……

请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象,写一段80词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出(不计入总词数)。

内容要求:

(1)帮助外国朋友;(2)与外国朋友交谈;(3)感谢小明;(4)小明很高兴。

词汇参考:try(do)one's best,find(that),heavy(lost),carry(show,take),taxi(car,bike),on the way,talk with(about)

Xiao Ming had a dream(梦)last night.In the dream,he volunteered to serve(志愿列队) the Beijing Olympics.

3.(2002年重庆市)根据内容要求写一篇 50-80词的短文。要求:书写格式正确,语句通畅、流畅,无语法错误。

内容提要:今年四月AAPP要在重庆召开,外国友人受到重庆人民的热烈欢迎。外国友人说:“重庆变化很大,街道清洁,灯火明亮,城市秀美,人更美,人们将记住重庆,重庆的明天会越来越好。”

4.(2002年安徽省)安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(the Yellow Mountain)。

(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。(2)乘汽车去大约要花3个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。(3)登山便可领略其云海(the sea of clouds)、奇松(wondrous pines)、怪石(unique rocks)等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

注意1贝适:80词左右。2鼻氩灰逐字翻译。

参考答案:

1.Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner.He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy thatI could help him.

2.Xiao Ming had a dream last night.In the dream,he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olym pics.He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries.When he found a foreign friend worried in the street,he went up to him and asked him what was the matter.The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack,and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel. Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel.Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing.Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming's English was very good.Xiao Ming was very happy.He smiled and smiled,then he woke up.

3.In April this year the AAPP was held in Chongqing.The foreign friends were warmly welcomed by Chongqing people.The foreign friends said,“Chongqing has changed a lot.The streets are clean,the lights are bright,the city is beautiful,and the people are friendly.Chongqing will be remembered and her tomorrow will become better and better.

4.The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the south of Anhui.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It's not far from here.It takes you about three hours to get there by bus.You can also go there by train or by plane.While you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy the sea of clouds,wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises,the sky looks very beautiful.It's really a nice place to visit.